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This is a flash fiction inspired by a novel I’ve written.
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Comment from
lancellot
This sounds a lot like a story, award winning sci-fi story I read years ago. Star Trek: Brave new world did a take on it in one their season one episodes. The original story was: The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas. by, Ursula K. Le Guin.
but he was {simple} at the wrong place
-simply
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from
DonandVicki
A truly disturbing flash fiction that was very gripping. The first few lines of your story pulled me in and kept me reading. It reminds me of neglected children in a orphanage.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
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