New Beginnings
When two lost souls come together23 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao , you now have seven votes!
Leland is a special child.
Children tend to be self-centred.
And living in an orphanage would have only made those children even more "selfish" having to " fight" for that little there was.
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Ciao , you now have seven votes!
Leland is a special child.
Children tend to be self-centred.
And living in an orphanage would have only made those children even more "selfish" having to " fight" for that little there was.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a great story, heartwarming and tender. Who could resist pouring love on such a child as Leland? Your descriptions are well done, just enough information to give the reader a mental picture. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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This is a great story, heartwarming and tender. Who could resist pouring love on such a child as Leland? Your descriptions are well done, just enough information to give the reader a mental picture. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I'm behind in responding, but had a medical procedure yesterday. I'm recovering well, but sitting time is limited for now. Blessings. Carol
Comment from lancellot
A very sweet and wholesome flash fiction story with the 'perfect' ending. It is also timely, given the holiday season. I can see this one being a hit with more than the FanStory membership. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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A very sweet and wholesome flash fiction story with the 'perfect' ending. It is also timely, given the holiday season. I can see this one being a hit with more than the FanStory membership. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Trying to get caught up but I am still 250 behind. Thank you for all the stars and the help, Lance. I know exactly how much you put into this,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful story of two people who just wanted someone to love. No one is perfect but Mary Ann and Leland were perfect for ea h other. Beautifully written Carol. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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This is a beautiful story of two people who just wanted someone to love. No one is perfect but Mary Ann and Leland were perfect for ea h other. Beautifully written Carol. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Douglas Goff
Goodness that is a bit of a dark place.
This sentence was heartbreaking:
Mrs. Hendricks sniffed dismissively. "He's not worth even looking at. He's so scrawny the wind would blow him right off his feet."
Picturing Eastern Europe somewhere pre-modernization.
All children need a home.
Douglas.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Goodness that is a bit of a dark place.
This sentence was heartbreaking:
Mrs. Hendricks sniffed dismissively. "He's not worth even looking at. He's so scrawny the wind would blow him right off his feet."
Picturing Eastern Europe somewhere pre-modernization.
All children need a home.
Douglas.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What an adorable story, Carol! You know just how to touch our hearts with this beautifully constructed and written tale of adoption. The visual is heart-breaking per se so you had me from the start and I enjoyed every single word, particularly "the lingering scent of porridge" which, for me, summed up the dreary institutional atmosphere of this orphanage. Very well done, Carol! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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What an adorable story, Carol! You know just how to touch our hearts with this beautifully constructed and written tale of adoption. The visual is heart-breaking per se so you had me from the start and I enjoyed every single word, particularly "the lingering scent of porridge" which, for me, summed up the dreary institutional atmosphere of this orphanage. Very well done, Carol! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much, Debbie. So sorry I am so late with my thank yous but know that they are as heart felt as ever. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
What a sweet, delightful story, your prolific writing is wonderful in every sense of the word Carol, they bring hope and a future in stories, I don't care if people like me or not, but I prefer to write poems with hope burnt into them, and I know that some depend on them, I write for their sake, and myself, because I know what pours from my heart, comes from somewhere that truly brings hope, and so do you, beautifully written, these would be great in a book of short stories, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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What a sweet, delightful story, your prolific writing is wonderful in every sense of the word Carol, they bring hope and a future in stories, I don't care if people like me or not, but I prefer to write poems with hope burnt into them, and I know that some depend on them, I write for their sake, and myself, because I know what pours from my heart, comes from somewhere that truly brings hope, and so do you, beautifully written, these would be great in a book of short stories, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Roy! Yes, I would much rather dream of everyone having hope and inspiration in their lives, love that the Lord intended us to share, and dreams of better tomorrows. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
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That's right Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
That was a lovely short story, Carol. I could already feel a strong bond developing between them and I'm sure this will blossom. I hope you return to these characters again, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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That was a lovely short story, Carol. I could already feel a strong bond developing between them and I'm sure this will blossom. I hope you return to these characters again, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I'm late as always lately but the thank you is just as sincere. I do appreciate the time and thoughts that you leave me with each review. I am thrilled that you enjoy my stories.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Well, Carol, this touched my heart no end. How could it not? I spent the first 2 and a half years of my life in an orphanage until I was chosen and got adopted. I have no more words, only tears of joy for the wee boy. Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Well, Carol, this touched my heart no end. How could it not? I spent the first 2 and a half years of my life in an orphanage until I was chosen and got adopted. I have no more words, only tears of joy for the wee boy. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I'm late as always lately but the thank you is just as sincere. I do appreciate the time and thoughts that you leave me with each review. I am thrilled that you enjoy my stories.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've said many times, I'm the old softy, but don't tell anyone and spoil my image, who is a big sucker for happy endings. Smiling beats the heck out of crying. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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As I've said many times, I'm the old softy, but don't tell anyone and spoil my image, who is a big sucker for happy endings. Smiling beats the heck out of crying. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Takes less muscles to smile as well...so you get off esy and everyone is happy. LOL Thanks as always, Carol
