Hellitree
The battle between fire and Humitree25 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Hellitree, the home suffers the damage of the spreading fire which chases the family from this hellscape into the water which saves them..
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This poem, Hellitree, the home suffers the damage of the spreading fire which chases the family from this hellscape into the water which saves them..
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Wow, your poem is so powerful. The imagination you put into your poem is great. I couldn't even come close to yours. So interesting. You did a great job.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Wow, your poem is so powerful. The imagination you put into your poem is great. I couldn't even come close to yours. So interesting. You did a great job.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Hi, Brenda. What a lovely compliment thank you! I'm very encouraging, and i'm really glad you like this soon.New characters will come.We have Humitree and Hemistone now. More to follow. Thank you again so much for your time.And I hope that you have a wonderful day!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Just wondering...are baby Humitrees called saplings? Thank goodness for the pond and for water itself to save the Humitrees as it saves our trees in real life. Cool poem and story
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Just wondering...are baby Humitrees called saplings? Thank goodness for the pond and for water itself to save the Humitrees as it saves our trees in real life. Cool poem and story
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Hi Marilyn thank you again! Yeah the Humitree have babies. In this case it's Infantree and in the case of Manistone it's Infanstone. There will be a little something coming up. That's going to address the personal names. There's the names of each one of them. Michigan has some reference to tree for tree people and Stone for stone people. Then there will be other characters. There's coming too. Thank you again Marilyn! I appreciate it! Have a great day!
Comment from Barry Penfold
Good entry in the Rhyming contest. Also different in its focus and appears to be part of a series. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Good entry in the Rhyming contest. Also different in its focus and appears to be part of a series. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Good morning Barry! Thank you again. This is really awesome. If you can take time and read it, thank you.I also thank you for your awesome writing and your encouraging comments.And I hope your day is wonderful too! Thank you again.I appreciate this so much!
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No worries and keep writing.
Comment from Elizabeth Delaney
The poem stands out for its striking imagery and vivid personification of trees, blending natural elements with human traits. The rhythm and word choice effectively convey urgency and emotion, creating a powerful and evocative narrative.
Good luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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The poem stands out for its striking imagery and vivid personification of trees, blending natural elements with human traits. The rhythm and word choice effectively convey urgency and emotion, creating a powerful and evocative narrative.
Good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you what I wonderful review.I appreciate it so much! Super pleased that you enjoyed it! We're gonna put all this together. I think with my humi tree.I'm a humistone.Next character is coming along soon! Thank you again for this great review and for your time and for your rating. I appreciate it.Have an awesome day!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are using these contests well, Lea. This is another fabulous part, and thanks to girlitree they are all saved from the flames. What a nightmare that must be. It makes you wonder if trees do feel pain. Another amazing picture! Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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You are using these contests well, Lea. This is another fabulous part, and thanks to girlitree they are all saved from the flames. What a nightmare that must be. It makes you wonder if trees do feel pain. Another amazing picture! Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Sandra again. I thank you so much. I think these might end up in a book poetry with a story, and I'll introduce other characters, and in this story.Yes the trees will feel pain. I think there might be fire people and water, people and soil, people and air people. I love making the pictures too.It's lots of fun and then forming the story around it. I'm pleased as punch that you are here, reading and offering your thoughts again.Happy new year and thank you!
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I love your ideas, Lea, and can't wait to meet the other characters. I wish I could create pictures as good as you can. I want to illustrate my childrens story books, but when I create on with AI, I can never keep the same face in different positions and doing different things. I think this year I'm going to have to try harder. Happy New Year, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Kayte Ray
this piece is written well. I love the flow of the work and the images that you present to the reader. The reader has a concrete picture from your words. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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this piece is written well. I love the flow of the work and the images that you present to the reader. The reader has a concrete picture from your words. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I thank you again.That's so great of you! I'm happy you enjoy these. It is awesome to have a fellow writer. I like your work.That is true validation.Thank you for that too! Have an awesome New Year.
I hope it's a great one!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
Time. Rhyme. Bind. Find. Behind. It's difficult to have running rhymes like have successfully done. Keep up the good work
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Time. Rhyme. Bind. Find. Behind. It's difficult to have running rhymes like have successfully done. Keep up the good work
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Wow, I'm so privileged. Thank you so much for this great race. I'm truly happy you like it.It's an honor to receive! I hope that you have the most amazing new year.And it's the coming year, brings you nothing but joy and happiness! Thank you for your time and your great rating.In your kind words, thank you again.Have an awesome evening!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my goodness what am interesting piece of poetry.
The yin and Yang of Fire and Water playing against each other in an EPI struggle is well constructed.
Nice. Very nice.
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Oh my goodness what am interesting piece of poetry.
The yin and Yang of Fire and Water playing against each other in an EPI struggle is well constructed.
Nice. Very nice.
D
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Douglas, thank you very much.I'm so happy to see you here and receive your kind words.Great writing, and for your time most of all! I truly hope that your Christmas was grand and Happy New Year to you. And hope the new year brings you all that too.You need and full of happiness and joy!
Comment from Raul1
I have understood your poem and it is well written. It has no mistakes I can correct. You have picked the right words for the poetry. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work! I like it.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I have understood your poem and it is well written. It has no mistakes I can correct. You have picked the right words for the poetry. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work! I like it.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Thank you for this fine compliment. Thank you for your great reading your encouraging remarks.And your time.Most of all this busy time of year. I hope that you had the best christmas and a mayor new year, bringing you much joy and happiness! Thank you again
