Your Caress
Passion can be awakened by gentleness2 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
In this short yet powerful poem, you manage to express a strong feeling in only nine words. This image of a caress starting the fire is very personal yet at the same time anyone can relate to it. The language used is very choice and serves to paint a very emotional picture.
In your short note you make the important point that - there is something to be said about being gentle.
How true this is. I think most humans have experienced the passion that can quickly develop from a gentle caress between lovers or the gentle merest touch of a kiss .
Thank you for sharing this beautiful picture.
Take care and all the best.
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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In this short yet powerful poem, you manage to express a strong feeling in only nine words. This image of a caress starting the fire is very personal yet at the same time anyone can relate to it. The language used is very choice and serves to paint a very emotional picture.
In your short note you make the important point that - there is something to be said about being gentle.
How true this is. I think most humans have experienced the passion that can quickly develop from a gentle caress between lovers or the gentle merest touch of a kiss .
Thank you for sharing this beautiful picture.
Take care and all the best.
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind review! I enjoyed your take on it.
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Take care
Comment from Sugarray77
This romantic verse is special and calls on us to use our emotions as well as being able to critique your poem. What a wonderful verse for this 10 or less contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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This romantic verse is special and calls on us to use our emotions as well as being able to critique your poem. What a wonderful verse for this 10 or less contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much I appreciate it. Sometimes that's the fun of the challenge, trying to make sure we can come up with an impactful poem with minimal words.
