His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "His Silence - Chapter 87"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
9 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I've been in the hospital so I'm behind on reading this but I hope to catch up soon. This is so interesting and I'd Eve is willing to help them. I hope she isn't doing the wrong thing by going to Oliver. Mary is dangerous and will kill someone easily.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
  |
I've been in the hospital so I'm behind on reading this but I hope to catch up soon. This is so interesting and I'd Eve is willing to help them. I hope she isn't doing the wrong thing by going to Oliver. Mary is dangerous and will kill someone easily.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Beth, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. I hope you feel better soon.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So, Danielle is going to address Oliver. I did read this out of order, but it does address how they got out of the basement and why Eve is with them. A very good write.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
|
So, Danielle is going to address Oliver. I did read this out of order, but it does address how they got out of the basement and why Eve is with them. A very good write.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Danielle, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
How can she possibly think Oliver won't tell Mary how and why she escaped? Even Callum has had her work on him so much he might give everything away and Eve could be in danger.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
|
How can she possibly think Oliver won't tell Mary how and why she escaped? Even Callum has had her work on him so much he might give everything away and Eve could be in danger.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
Another fine chapter to your book. I am so glad that Callum and Danielle were able to free with Eve's help. Not understanding why they don't just run.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
|
Jacob,
Another fine chapter to your book. I am so glad that Callum and Danielle were able to free with Eve's help. Not understanding why they don't just run.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
-
You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I must admit I can virtually feel that refreshing cold air on her cheeks and the exhilaration of escaping. She has to confront Oliver who seems to be caught up in this as much as Danielle. It'll be interesting to read what he has to say. Nice imagery with the chest tightening. A tense chapter, well composed. Happy New Year, Jacob!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
|
I must admit I can virtually feel that refreshing cold air on her cheeks and the exhilaration of escaping. She has to confront Oliver who seems to be caught up in this as much as Danielle. It'll be interesting to read what he has to say. Nice imagery with the chest tightening. A tense chapter, well composed. Happy New Year, Jacob!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from lancellot
Good writing, editing and pacing. While reading this, the reader could easily picture the scene and the characters actions and reactions. You give enough detail to make the scene whole. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
|
Good writing, editing and pacing. While reading this, the reader could easily picture the scene and the characters actions and reactions. You give enough detail to make the scene whole. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jacob, this is a fine chapter and so very well written. I can feel the apprehension, the fear even S the tension rises. Now, I will.be looking forward to see what happens next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
|
Hi Jacob, this is a fine chapter and so very well written. I can feel the apprehension, the fear even S the tension rises. Now, I will.be looking forward to see what happens next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Ulla, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
Unless one actually knows that they are are adopted, or that they have notices they are 'different' to their adopted family, it would be an incredible shock, hard to manage and adjust to, you would wonderful about reality itself, beautifully written. Blessings Jacob, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
|
Unless one actually knows that they are are adopted, or that they have notices they are 'different' to their adopted family, it would be an incredible shock, hard to manage and adjust to, you would wonderful about reality itself, beautifully written. Blessings Jacob, Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Roy, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
-
Well done
-
Well done
Comment from Begin Again
I guess Danielle believes it's an all or nothing sort of thing. I am guessing she's about to confront Oliver and either he helps them or Mary wins again. Regardless, she's playing Russian roulette with everyone's life at the moment. Nice way to start the New Year....fireworks..lol
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
|
I guess Danielle believes it's an all or nothing sort of thing. I am guessing she's about to confront Oliver and either he helps them or Mary wins again. Regardless, she's playing Russian roulette with everyone's life at the moment. Nice way to start the New Year....fireworks..lol
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
-
Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Happy New Year!
