His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "His Silence - Chapter 89"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
8 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like most of the secrets are out and they will soon go back to normal with everything being solved. It has been a really excellent story and the first thing I wasn't to read when I got back home.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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It sounds like most of the secrets are out and they will soon go back to normal with everything being solved. It has been a really excellent story and the first thing I wasn't to read when I got back home.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
There are a lot of surprises in this chapter. I didn't realize Mary admitted to killing Danielle's natural parents. It is sad Harvey has spent so much of his life in prison for crimes he didn't commit. I would think he would have broken through whatever spell Mary had him under a lot sooner.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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There are a lot of surprises in this chapter. I didn't realize Mary admitted to killing Danielle's natural parents. It is sad Harvey has spent so much of his life in prison for crimes he didn't commit. I would think he would have broken through whatever spell Mary had him under a lot sooner.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
This chapter is great. You can feel the emotions of the characters as you read. There is a lot of action going on too. I'm curious whats coming next.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Jacob,
This chapter is great. You can feel the emotions of the characters as you read. There is a lot of action going on too. I'm curious whats coming next.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hi Jacob, what a fast-paced chapter which I love, with all the strands coming together nicely. I did ask last time who Sarah was but I now realise that she's one of the investigating officers (she still appears to be missing from your list of characters). I palpably feel huge relief for Danielle and am glad you wanted to keep the identity of her father a secret. An excellent chapter, Jacob! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Hi Jacob, what a fast-paced chapter which I love, with all the strands coming together nicely. I did ask last time who Sarah was but I now realise that she's one of the investigating officers (she still appears to be missing from your list of characters). I palpably feel huge relief for Danielle and am glad you wanted to keep the identity of her father a secret. An excellent chapter, Jacob! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Holy Cow!! You did a wonderful job wrapping up this story and filling in all the loose ends. You're a very talented author. I really enjoyed reading this. I do hope you publish it.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Holy Cow!! You did a wonderful job wrapping up this story and filling in all the loose ends. You're a very talented author. I really enjoyed reading this. I do hope you publish it.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Barbara, and for the six stars. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. I will be approaching literary agents in due course, when I'm certain it's properly done.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow, what a chapter!! We get a lot of resolution here. Mary is arrested, but there are challenges ahead on that as there are insanity pleas on the table. Oliver is going to survive, which is good, but some of the people, all really, have some obstacles to get past.
Interesting that you've chosen for Danielle to not pursue a relationship with Oliver, but I get it. It gives a level of legitimacy to the story. It's what a person in her position might opt for.
Great chapter, great story, my friend!!
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Oh wow, what a chapter!! We get a lot of resolution here. Mary is arrested, but there are challenges ahead on that as there are insanity pleas on the table. Oliver is going to survive, which is good, but some of the people, all really, have some obstacles to get past.
Interesting that you've chosen for Danielle to not pursue a relationship with Oliver, but I get it. It gives a level of legitimacy to the story. It's what a person in her position might opt for.
Great chapter, great story, my friend!!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Rhonda, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Always!!
Comment from Begin Again
Way to go, Jacob! Nice way to wrap the story up. Danielle's mind must be spinning with everything that has happened and now to have face the people who raised her..... I mean, the guilt she must carry even though her intentions were for Harvey. Life never goes exactly as we plan. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Way to go, Jacob! Nice way to wrap the story up. Danielle's mind must be spinning with everything that has happened and now to have face the people who raised her..... I mean, the guilt she must carry even though her intentions were for Harvey. Life never goes exactly as we plan. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really felt the story. The way you described Danielle's confusion and relief as she wakes up in the hospital had me right there with her. I was drawn into the tension between her and Sarah. The emotions felt real. Especially when she found out about Eve's true identity. I also liked how you kept the pacing tight. You did a great job of making me care about the characters!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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I really felt the story. The way you described Danielle's confusion and relief as she wakes up in the hospital had me right there with her. I was drawn into the tension between her and Sarah. The emotions felt real. Especially when she found out about Eve's true identity. I also liked how you kept the pacing tight. You did a great job of making me care about the characters!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
