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The Book of Biden

Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "new year, old lies"
the life and times of Joe Biden

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.

I don't believe in resolutions for the New Year.

If we are determinate to make a change in our life, any time of the year is fine.

As for our leaders, spewing lies for those like Biden and Zelensky, it's second nature

They sure won't grow a conscience just because we are begin a new year.

So the lies continue.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Ooooooh! Very good point. Wise and candid, indeed! And great photo op to put an exclamation point on your words. After reading through all of these entries, this is the one that's getting my vote. Good luck in the polls. xoxo

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much for the honor
reply by Rachelle Allen on 04-Jan-2025
    You earned it - and at the moment, you are now ahead! Woot!
Comment from jaded831
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Your poem tells it like it is, personally I am afraid of tomorrows. I have no confidence in our future president. He made good speeches about change, but I question how he will make those changes.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem captures the truth about how "new" years often bring the same old conversations. I love the clever twist in the title. The title sets up the poem perfectly. Really enjoyed the way you said so much in so little! Great work!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much Michael