The Robe
rhyming quatrains21 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray,
I think we all have a garment that we cherish above the rest.
I love all the examples you cite that made that particular robe special.
I have a special hoodie that I have owned for nearly 10 years. The cuffs are starting to frail and they are twice as big now even after it has been washed. And yet I feel so snug in it.
I use it in the garden ever Autumn and when I cuddle up with my furry "boys".
I wear it in Winter when I am taking care of the woodfire throughout the day.
It has a military pattern and I love it.
My mamma had a knitted robe she made that she cherished and wore in the colder months when she was doing her art in her studio.
She only had a small heater there so she kept her knitted robe on under a cotton white lab/coat to keep warm.
If I close my eyes I can still see her in it.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Ciao Sugarray,
I think we all have a garment that we cherish above the rest.
I love all the examples you cite that made that particular robe special.
I have a special hoodie that I have owned for nearly 10 years. The cuffs are starting to frail and they are twice as big now even after it has been washed. And yet I feel so snug in it.
I use it in the garden ever Autumn and when I cuddle up with my furry "boys".
I wear it in Winter when I am taking care of the woodfire throughout the day.
It has a military pattern and I love it.
My mamma had a knitted robe she made that she cherished and wore in the colder months when she was doing her art in her studio.
She only had a small heater there so she kept her knitted robe on under a cotton white lab/coat to keep warm.
If I close my eyes I can still see her in it.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Oh, thank you so very much, Franca. I'm glad you could identify with this Robe. I secretly have an old sweatshirt that I've worn for years that is stained and frayed, but I love it! Thank you again... Ciao!!
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Robe, presented with four ABCB-rhymed quatrains, honors the garment that has held grandchildren and been the armed blanket for many sleeping souls.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This poem, The Robe, presented with four ABCB-rhymed quatrains, honors the garment that has held grandchildren and been the armed blanket for many sleeping souls.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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thank you dear Bill.
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Memories do comfort us in many wonderful ways, and the clothes we wear, the tasks we perform, and everyday activities we remember different occasions, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Memories do comfort us in many wonderful ways, and the clothes we wear, the tasks we perform, and everyday activities we remember different occasions, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hello Kim. Thanks bunches!! So glad you liked 'The Robe' :)
Melissa
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Melissa,
This is a wonderful poem. To have so memories tied up in a robe is insane. I can relate I have an old and tattered housecoat. I often wonder why I don't throw it away. Your poem nailed the reason.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Melissa,
This is a wonderful poem. To have so memories tied up in a robe is insane. I can relate I have an old and tattered housecoat. I often wonder why I don't throw it away. Your poem nailed the reason.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Cecilia!! So glad you liked it and realized your housecoat is special :). Hugs!
Melissa
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You're welcome
Comment from zanya
A-h-h this poem is simply beautiful, evocative and wistful with a title that invites the reader to explore significant life events through 'The Robe.' It brought a smile to my face on this chilly winter's day.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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A-h-h this poem is simply beautiful, evocative and wistful with a title that invites the reader to explore significant life events through 'The Robe.' It brought a smile to my face on this chilly winter's day.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hi Zanya. Thanks for your wonderful review and comments. I'm delighted you like 'The Robe'. :)
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a precious robe that is full of memories. It reminds me of people's tattered couches. This is my first time to read a poem about a tattered robe that is full of memorable moments.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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What a precious robe that is full of memories. It reminds me of people's tattered couches. This is my first time to read a poem about a tattered robe that is full of memorable moments.
Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hi Lisa. Thanks so very much, sweet friend.
Melissa
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely done, Melissa. A article be it clothing or something else filled with fine memories is always a treasure even though it might be frayed around the edges a bit.
Always a pleasure to read your finely rhymed and metred work. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Very nicely done, Melissa. A article be it clothing or something else filled with fine memories is always a treasure even though it might be frayed around the edges a bit.
Always a pleasure to read your finely rhymed and metred work. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hey there Gloria. Thank you so much for your wonderful review and thoughts on this one!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse
sets the scene and peaceful mood.
-Good transition to your memories
as you remember your children and
their young lives and growing up.
-The "tiny rips" represent what
happened, but also how you cared
for each of them sharing words of comfort.
-A very good concluding verse with
a lovely image of "feathered snowflakes"
and how you would never trade this robe.
-Very well done. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse
sets the scene and peaceful mood.
-Good transition to your memories
as you remember your children and
their young lives and growing up.
-The "tiny rips" represent what
happened, but also how you cared
for each of them sharing words of comfort.
-A very good concluding verse with
a lovely image of "feathered snowflakes"
and how you would never trade this robe.
-Very well done. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hello Pam. Thanks so much. I am encouraged by your comments on this one.
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Melissa!
There is something so comforting about wearing a robe that shares the memories of which you write. I own a number of clothing articles are filled with such memories. I also own a beautiful crepe blouse - pale pink - that belonged to my mother but was going to be discarded by "those in charge" until I rescued it. Doesn't fit me; never will. But I simply couldn't bear to see it be given away to strangers as my mother treasured it so.
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hello, Melissa!
There is something so comforting about wearing a robe that shares the memories of which you write. I own a number of clothing articles are filled with such memories. I also own a beautiful crepe blouse - pale pink - that belonged to my mother but was going to be discarded by "those in charge" until I rescued it. Doesn't fit me; never will. But I simply couldn't bear to see it be given away to strangers as my mother treasured it so.
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much Diane. I so appreciate your comments and sharing your story about the blouse. :)
Melissa
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is lovely, and the picture is perfect for your words. There can be great comfort in wearing old clothing. I like the rhymes, and the rhythm is perfect. I enjoyed the various memories. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This is lovely, and the picture is perfect for your words. There can be great comfort in wearing old clothing. I like the rhymes, and the rhythm is perfect. I enjoyed the various memories. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I so appreciate your thoughts on this verse, Carol. Hugs!!
Melissa
