Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Another wonderful addition to your renga book, beautifully written and presented, as the mating dance would be and hopefully have a sweet ending/dream****kahpot

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Beautifully atmospheric, Gypsy, and another stunner for the Book of Renga Verse. Just to reiterate my condolences for your sad loss. Warmest wishes Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

Cerulean -- always loved that word for some reason...
the pic looks like twinkling stars - so cool
a great 3-liner renga!
excellent imagery
smooth flow
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

You are doing well with your Renga book. Many chapters and contributors.

This is lovely snapshot with appropriately chosen words to suggest romance.

A most enjoyable read today. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Gypsy 😊