Golden Shower
A photo from the beach11 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. It us uplifting and positive. This is surely an artful surprise. Beautiful picture. The rhymes are done well.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It us uplifting and positive. This is surely an artful surprise. Beautiful picture. The rhymes are done well.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much ! Have a good evening!
Tina
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Thanks so much ! Have a good evening!
Tina
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Tina,
This is a God-thing. I have had this happen twice. It's as you said --
His lovely artful sky surprise
has made me see with brand new eyes...
His gorgeous mercy pours out free
from heaven's door to you and me!
Just beautiful and praiseworthy. Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Dear Tina,
This is a God-thing. I have had this happen twice. It's as you said --
His lovely artful sky surprise
has made me see with brand new eyes...
His gorgeous mercy pours out free
from heaven's door to you and me!
Just beautiful and praiseworthy. Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Aww...you made me tear up. You are precious and I'm sure the Lord has more beautiful things to teach us.
Hugs, Sally!
Tina
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Aww...you made me tear up. You are precious and I'm sure the Lord has more beautiful things to teach us.
Hugs, Sally!
Tina
Comment from ESOSTINE
A great tribute to this beautiful sight of natures' wonders. Your poem properly captures the scene. And I love the peace and joys this brings to you and the gratitude to God. Well done, dear Tina. Remain blessed.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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A great tribute to this beautiful sight of natures' wonders. Your poem properly captures the scene. And I love the peace and joys this brings to you and the gratitude to God. Well done, dear Tina. Remain blessed.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Wendy G
It is beautiful when we have moments of unexpected joy like that, and our souls are automaticall uplifted and inspired to give thanks and praise. A lovely poem, clearly expressed.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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It is beautiful when we have moments of unexpected joy like that, and our souls are automaticall uplifted and inspired to give thanks and praise. A lovely poem, clearly expressed.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Amen! It's heavenly:)
Thank you Wendy!
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Amen! It's heavenly:)
Thank you Wendy!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Golden Shower, presented with six rhyming couplets, captures the awesome visual of Heaven's Glow piercing through the dark horizon and restoring souls worldwide. Nice.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This poem, Golden Shower, presented with six rhyming couplets, captures the awesome visual of Heaven's Glow piercing through the dark horizon and restoring souls worldwide. Nice.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Bill. Your complimentary review that reads like a lovely poem is appreciated.
Tina
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Thanks, Bill. Your complimentary review that reads like a lovely poem is appreciated.
Tina
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Thanks, Bill. Your complimentary review that reads like a lovely poem is appreciated.
Tina
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I am sure that must've been a wonderful site to see. May you have a wonderful day a wonderful week and may God bless your new year with prosperity and health. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This is very well and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I am sure that must've been a wonderful site to see. May you have a wonderful day a wonderful week and may God bless your new year with prosperity and health. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Patricia, Thank you for your thoughts on my poem. I appreciate it!
Tina
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Patricia, Thank you for your thoughts on my poem. I appreciate it!
Tina
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Patricia, Thank you for your thoughts on my poem. I appreciate it!
Tina
Comment from June Sargent
What an amazing photo! And your poem pays tribute to the One who created such a splendid vista for us to feast our eyes on. Lovely presentation! I enjoyed it
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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What an amazing photo! And your poem pays tribute to the One who created such a splendid vista for us to feast our eyes on. Lovely presentation! I enjoyed it
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Aw, thanks! It was indeed SPLENDID! Thanks for reading this!
Tina
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Aw, thanks! It was indeed SPLENDID! Thanks for reading this!
Tina
Comment from royowen
There's no doubt about how our came into being, it was the Lord above, who made this world with care an love, such lovely couplets have you designed and written a poem, that shows your skill, and God's wonder, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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There's no doubt about how our came into being, it was the Lord above, who made this world with care an love, such lovely couplets have you designed and written a poem, that shows your skill, and God's wonder, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Roy. Hope you're doing well. Have a great day:)
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Bless you Tina
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem makes me feel a sense of gratitude. I really admire how you captured the beauty of nature. The idea of the "golden shower on the sea" is perfect. I can feel the joy you express for God's creation. I especially love the way you bring it all together with the line "His gorgeous mercy pours out free". That leaves me with a sense of peace and appreciation. It's a lovely way of sharing His artistry. Beautiful work!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Your poem makes me feel a sense of gratitude. I really admire how you captured the beauty of nature. The idea of the "golden shower on the sea" is perfect. I can feel the joy you express for God's creation. I especially love the way you bring it all together with the line "His gorgeous mercy pours out free". That leaves me with a sense of peace and appreciation. It's a lovely way of sharing His artistry. Beautiful work!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Wow. I should frame this as I want so badly to shar
e how wonderful God is. I appreciate you, friend Michael.
Tina
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God enjoys showing us out beautiful nature is. To me, it's a remind of all of His glory. We often forget to thank Him for all He shares with us. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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God enjoys showing us out beautiful nature is. To me, it's a remind of all of His glory. We often forget to thank Him for all He shares with us. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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So true! You're welcome, Barbara. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem:) Have a blessed day!
