Comment from Elias Noor

Excellent

This is a charming and well-crafted acrostic poem that beautifully captures the subject's multifaceted personality. With slight enhancements to originality and depth, it could become even more impactful.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Welcome! Congratulations on your first post!

These are very good lines for your acrostic poem we m but I have an important suggestion. I believe the first word should begin the line. You have smilies but writing it directly may work better. A few examples:

Ambition has me full of drive

Real, authentic character helps

Truth means living life with honesty

Etc

I am not certain if you and repeat smilies throughout. Possibly check with the Contest Committee through Tom. When it says Contact Us, he'll be the one to respond to you. Before the deadline all entries must comply. Yours may be OK but my advice is to check. Best wishes, Alex

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Welcome to FS. what a wonderful way to start, I never thought of composing an acrostic this way, it has opened up many ideas, love your descriptive words in their meaning of each letter, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Congrats on your first post! Your poem is such a beautiful tribute! I love how each letter is carefully chosen to share a unique quality. The person you're describing sounds remarkable and full of life. I thought this was so creative and heartfelt! What a lovely way to highlight their special qualities!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025