Unconditionally
Five-Seven Five24 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Unconditional love is the best kind and we rarely feel it these days except from our pets. You know how you feel about your faith and this post is touching and warm hearted, love Dolly x x x
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Unconditional love is the best kind and we rarely feel it these days except from our pets. You know how you feel about your faith and this post is touching and warm hearted, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Sally Law
You two rock with the gospel of Jesus Christ! Not a day goes by I don't thank the Lord for the day of my salvation. It was all because of Jesus and His great sacrifice for you and for me.
Beautifully written and illustrated in short verse 5-7-5 poetry.
Sending you both my very best today as always, and my good wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :)) Xos
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You two rock with the gospel of Jesus Christ! Not a day goes by I don't thank the Lord for the day of my salvation. It was all because of Jesus and His great sacrifice for you and for me.
Beautifully written and illustrated in short verse 5-7-5 poetry.
Sending you both my very best today as always, and my good wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :)) Xos
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line, followed by
how He gave us His love.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line, followed by
how He gave us His love.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Charles D Ezell
He did that and sent us the Holy Spirit to guide us and correct us. One never knows what they are missing until being born again. So glad you posted this. Well done.
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He did that and sent us the Holy Spirit to guide us and correct us. One never knows what they are missing until being born again. So glad you posted this. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I agree with you. This is a good 5 7 5 and a colorful presentation. I enjoyed reading this 575 poem. We must strive for unconditional love, like Jesus's. Best wishes, Alex
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I agree with you. This is a good 5 7 5 and a colorful presentation. I enjoyed reading this 575 poem. We must strive for unconditional love, like Jesus's. Best wishes, Alex
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from l.raven
Amen Don, He gave His life...so we could live...
and forgives us for our sins...
a love like no other...
and He does it all unconditionally...
truly the ultimate gift...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love
your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Amen Don, He gave His life...so we could live...
and forgives us for our sins...
a love like no other...
and He does it all unconditionally...
truly the ultimate gift...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love
your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Linda, so very much for the kind and meaningful review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Unconditionally. has the proper formatting and lets it known by all readers that Jesus came and died for all to give us a chance to be saved. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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This 5-7-5, Unconditionally. has the proper formatting and lets it known by all readers that Jesus came and died for all to give us a chance to be saved. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Bill.
Comment from dragonpoet
HI D & V.
This poem is short and to the point. It tells the main theme of Christianity, the birth, life and death of Jesus saves believers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice rest of the week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or just search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.com.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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HI D & V.
This poem is short and to the point. It tells the main theme of Christianity, the birth, life and death of Jesus saves believers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice rest of the week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or just search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.com.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Joan, for the kind and meaningful review.
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You are most kindly welcome, D&V
Joan
Comment from mermaids
You have written an excellent faith based 5-7-5 poem that captures how God's love is unconditional for us. Short poems are a challenge to create but you did well here with a spiritual poem. It is a theme we need to be reminded of from time to time.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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You have written an excellent faith based 5-7-5 poem that captures how God's love is unconditional for us. Short poems are a challenge to create but you did well here with a spiritual poem. It is a theme we need to be reminded of from time to time.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much for the kind and meaningful review.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a very succinct sum up of Jesus' mission on earth. Each line in this 5-7-5 is strong. You use specific and meaningful words well.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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This is a very succinct sum up of Jesus' mission on earth. Each line in this 5-7-5 is strong. You use specific and meaningful words well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your generous review.
