Woodlands Sounds
A bit of a different format18 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Oh! I want to try it! I never can seem to create shapes with poems. I will try this and let you know. Did you begin with an image as the prompt? How creative you are. Thank you for sharing this! Alexandra :)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Oh! I want to try it! I never can seem to create shapes with poems. I will try this and let you know. Did you begin with an image as the prompt? How creative you are. Thank you for sharing this! Alexandra :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. No, I did not start with an image for the poem. I wrote the poem first and then found the image.
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Oh. Thank you for sharing that. :)
Comment from fm wright
Having raised wolves and wolf hybrids I hear what your words say, though healthy wolves avoid human contact as much as possible. It is only the sick or aged, or perhaps a lone wolf will actually go after humans. Still an interesting poem. The words and image fit well together.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Having raised wolves and wolf hybrids I hear what your words say, though healthy wolves avoid human contact as much as possible. It is only the sick or aged, or perhaps a lone wolf will actually go after humans. Still an interesting poem. The words and image fit well together.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your kind. Review is much appreciated.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hey Patricia. Great job on crafting a new, fun form. I always enjoy trying shape poems and must try this one soon. You did a good job of picking a theme and art and the emotional pull of 'chills of fear' was a good addition. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hey Patricia. Great job on crafting a new, fun form. I always enjoy trying shape poems and must try this one soon. You did a good job of picking a theme and art and the emotional pull of 'chills of fear' was a good addition. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for making time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-I'm glad I've found someone
who also likes syllables.
-I never thought of just
taking some numbers and
seeing what happens.
-You did a good job with yours.
-Very good nature imagery
creates a good word picture
of the wolf and "winter winds."
-You describe the impact of
of sounds of the wolves.
-Very good concluding lines.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-I'm glad I've found someone
who also likes syllables.
-I never thought of just
taking some numbers and
seeing what happens.
-You did a good job with yours.
-Very good nature imagery
creates a good word picture
of the wolf and "winter winds."
-You describe the impact of
of sounds of the wolves.
-Very good concluding lines.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I am always so grateful for your nice reviews. Thank you.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Hearing wolves when you are all alone in the woods would send a chill down your back for sure. I liked the suspenseful tone and the chilling feeling to this. Very well done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hearing wolves when you are all alone in the woods would send a chill down your back for sure. I liked the suspenseful tone and the chilling feeling to this. Very well done. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work
Comment from l.raven
Hi Patricia, I have never heard a wolf
howl in the wild...but I have heard pack
of Coyotes...either way I wouldn't want
to be a feast for either one...but they are
beautiful...
I love your poem you...the perfect picture
my sweet friend...very well written...love you...
Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Hi Patricia, I have never heard a wolf
howl in the wild...but I have heard pack
of Coyotes...either way I wouldn't want
to be a feast for either one...but they are
beautiful...
I love your poem you...the perfect picture
my sweet friend...very well written...love you...
Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Linda for your nice review
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always soooo very welcome my
sweet friend...love xxoo
Comment from judiverse
I wouldn't want to hear the sound of wolves. They would make me afraid, This is a lovely presentation. I think you might do better than "sounds are to be heard." It's wordy. Think of what the sounds might be from. Be more specific. How do the wolves sound? Excellent format. judi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I wouldn't want to hear the sound of wolves. They would make me afraid, This is a lovely presentation. I think you might do better than "sounds are to be heard." It's wordy. Think of what the sounds might be from. Be more specific. How do the wolves sound? Excellent format. judi
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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With gratitude to my heart of wish to thank you for a nice
Comment from evilynne
The format is great. The poem is very cute. Hope nobody gets eaten by the wolves! The picture of the wolf is cute. I can just hear the wolves howling! Evi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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The format is great. The poem is very cute. Hope nobody gets eaten by the wolves! The picture of the wolf is cute. I can just hear the wolves howling! Evi
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this thank
Comment from jim vecchio
I like the way you arrange your words in this poem.I certainly hope they do not come looking for you. I would miss these wonderful poems of yours. you do so well in arranging these syllable counts.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I like the way you arrange your words in this poem.I certainly hope they do not come looking for you. I would miss these wonderful poems of yours. you do so well in arranging these syllable counts.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your very nice review
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Patricia,
I like this poem about a very misunderstood animal. I have never heard a wolf's howl (except second hand on YouTube). The howl is both beautiful and alarming. I keep thinking this is how they communicate, though. I don't know what I would do if I ever crossed paths with a wolf's though.
Great poem,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Patricia,
I like this poem about a very misunderstood animal. I have never heard a wolf's howl (except second hand on YouTube). The howl is both beautiful and alarming. I keep thinking this is how they communicate, though. I don't know what I would do if I ever crossed paths with a wolf's though.
Great poem,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. I appreciate it.
