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Tough Interrogation

a script

4 total reviews 
Comment from nomi338
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You get 5 stars for having the gall, the nerve to submit something this crazy with a straight face. I could not look the FanStory family in the face after posting something like this. I think this proves that you are certified bonkers. and I mean this in an air of love and acceptance.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
    Was it something they said? : )
reply by nomi338 on 09-Jan-2025
    Duh! It was everything they said. What ever the heck it was that they said.
Comment from jim vecchio
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I also did not understand this one also, but it was fun to read. The trouble's with me. When I was a kid, it took me awnile to understand Howdy Doody.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
    He went on and on about string theory. : )
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This script was creative and easy to follow. It was helpful that you listed the characters. I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes, Alex

Just one
A note:

Did you want to separate this?

Tointerpret.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
    No. It is alien interpretation.
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 08-Jan-2025
    Oh. I did think aliens were interrogating other aliens. :( I'll reeead it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This dialogue is excellent! I love how you build a fun world where words seem to bend and twist in unexpected ways. The way the characters interact with each other - especially Neno's witty remarks - keeps everything lighthearted and entertaining. It's fun to read and leaves me with a smile. Well done on creating such an enjoyable exchange!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Michael, for getting engaged with the scene.