Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a really good poem about a day in the life of a brown bear. Your rhyme is well done, and the movements of the animal are accurate. That is a good picture of a rather skinny spring-time bear.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

Comment from Trina Layne

Excellent

I've been busy with work lately. It has slowed down my pace. I'm taking a little time now to catch up with what I have missed here on FS. I like your Brown Bear poem - a day in the life of a brown bear fresh off hibernation. I've never had the pleasure of seeing a bear in person. We don't have bears where I live. We have a lot of pesky monkeys. I have a piece about them that I will probably share soon. Keep sharing and writing well.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

great poem about bears in their natural habitat. I loved the narrative of a bear going about his day, hungry and in a bad mood, then needing a nap after breakfast great picture

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Jake,

Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A nature's walk through the day of the large predator... certainly laden with deep and illustrative descriptions! ;) Thanx so much for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Yvette,

Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

Hi Cecilia, this is a very nice poem. The rhymes are done well. The picture you choice is perfect for the poem. I love nature too. Great writing. Love, Brenda

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Brenda,

Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent I find your words full of imagery, as I imagine the bear rising from his hibernation and so very hungry, love watching the bears feed on the fish, on T.V. of course, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Kapot,

Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Cecilia.
This is a nicely done story poem about a day in a bears life. Sounds like a good one for this bear today.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Joan,

Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

I love the calm flow of the poem and how it describes the brown bear as it hunts for food and finds a rest. Sounds like a story that could appeal to both children and adults. Well done, dear Cecilia for sharing this beautiful piece. Best regards

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Esostine,

Thank you for the lovely review. I really appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are detailed, nature based and creative. Reading
the author's description of a Bear's daily life was interesting and fun! The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and goes well
with both the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Harmony,

Thank you very much for the great review. I appreciate you.

Cecilia

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Bears amaze me. They look so cuddly, but I know they can be extremely dangerous. I would not want to walk up and pet one. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Barbara,

Thank you for the great review. I am with you and would not want to wake up to a bear. YIKES!

Cecilia