The Kirby Case - Part 5
Detective Mike Brady attempts to stop a serial killer17 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
I was watching a documentary on "Jack the Ripper" last night on PBS and it reminded me of your series. Sounds like Mike Brady will have his hands full. I enjoyed reading.
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I was watching a documentary on "Jack the Ripper" last night on PBS and it reminded me of your series. Sounds like Mike Brady will have his hands full. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You deserve a six, Pam, I'm loving this story written in poetry. Very clever. Are these girls and their murders from real cases? It feels as if they are. The poem flows so smoothly too. That all these young ladies were hoping he would be the man of their dreams is so sad. Sometimes it scares my to go out. Not that any man would be after an old diddy like me. Lol. Well done, my friend, the mystery of who this serial killer is continues to baffle us. I look forward to the next part. :)) Sandra xx
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You deserve a six, Pam, I'm loving this story written in poetry. Very clever. Are these girls and their murders from real cases? It feels as if they are. The poem flows so smoothly too. That all these young ladies were hoping he would be the man of their dreams is so sad. Sometimes it scares my to go out. Not that any man would be after an old diddy like me. Lol. Well done, my friend, the mystery of who this serial killer is continues to baffle us. I look forward to the next part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
I must admit, this is most creative, and all the time I've been reading, writing and reviewing I've never read a series like this, so well done, you've achieved an original first, and I'm happy to say that, perfect as always Pam, blessings Roy
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I must admit, this is most creative, and all the time I've been reading, writing and reviewing I've never read a series like this, so well done, you've achieved an original first, and I'm happy to say that, perfect as always Pam, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am wondering about why the fake ID's for the victims. They're DNA would prove who they are. You're doing a wonderful job writing this. I really enjoyed reading.
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I am wondering about why the fake ID's for the victims. They're DNA would prove who they are. You're doing a wonderful job writing this. I really enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am not sure if this is a real case or a story of fiction Pam, but you certainly brought the scene to life here as this Detective searches for clues to catch this killer, love Dolly x x x
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I am not sure if this is a real case or a story of fiction Pam, but you certainly brought the scene to life here as this Detective searches for clues to catch this killer, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Dolly for this wonderful review
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Your poem here does not end, it just stops. You might add:
That man put those poor girls through hell.
We vow to put that man in jail.
That would close out the stanza. Karen
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Your poem here does not end, it just stops. You might add:
That man put those poor girls through hell.
We vow to put that man in jail.
That would close out the stanza. Karen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hhhh
Comment from Bill Schott
The victims are assembled now in this gathering of women who sought love in the wrong places with the wrong man. The eventual solving of this mayhem cannot come soon enough.
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The victims are assembled now in this gathering of women who sought love in the wrong places with the wrong man. The eventual solving of this mayhem cannot come soon enough.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Bill for this great review
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Pam,
Another great poem. I hope they catch this sicko before he kills anymore women. I wonder what goes through serial killers head to do something so horrific.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Pam,
Another great poem. I hope they catch this sicko before he kills anymore women. I wonder what goes through serial killers head to do something so horrific.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia for a great review
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You are welcome
Comment from Tim Margetts
The story continues apace, Pam
This summary piece brings together all the victims- so far known of - and links things together succinctly.
I wonder what will give him away and let the detective close the net on this serial killer.
Tim x
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The story continues apace, Pam
This summary piece brings together all the victims- so far known of - and links things together succinctly.
I wonder what will give him away and let the detective close the net on this serial killer.
Tim x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Tim for a wonderful review
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
How do we know so much about how he looks - baby blue eyes, etc.? Fake IDs to throw the investigators off? He was a planner.
It sounds like Carol Pews fought back and that is why she was so bloodied and broken.
Ugh! It's getting harder to read this as poetry - I get goosebumps just reading about people who can kill and seemingly enjoy his sport.
xo
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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How do we know so much about how he looks - baby blue eyes, etc.? Fake IDs to throw the investigators off? He was a planner.
It sounds like Carol Pews fought back and that is why she was so bloodied and broken.
Ugh! It's getting harder to read this as poetry - I get goosebumps just reading about people who can kill and seemingly enjoy his sport.
xo
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Pam for a wonderful review
