Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Haha. This is funny. I understand what "Going Dutch" means. I like your using this photo as a metaphor for your poem. It's a humous idea for a poem

Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This poem is adorable, Patricia. I love the look of those types of shoes. This is well written with a clever play on words. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs, Alexandra x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Comment from evilynne

Excellent

Hahaha! Definitely not a great idea for a first date. Love the picture of the wooden shoes! Dutch treat is better later in the dating game. You certainly said it well. Evi

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Your reviews are important. I thank you so much for them.

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Patricia,

This is a great three line poem. It also has some good advice for a first date. Nothing ruins a date faster. You want a partner that will take care of you.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this thank

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You welcome

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

I totally agree with you there. I have been called a romantic, but I truly believe that first dates are the solé responsibility of the man. I like the way you presented the concept. Nice one.
RJ

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Thank you for stopping by my work and a nice review.

reply by RJ Heritage on 09-Jan-2025

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I was never thus in my day, as the male I was always expected to pay, and I never considered asking the girl to pay. Only once did it happen, Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

This is very cute, Patricia and a hood use of the three line poem format. These days this practice is becoming more and more common. I agree that it's not a good one for a first date, or even a second. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Comment from fm wright

Excellent

I like the humor in it. It definitely describes first date etiquette in a very charming way. The syllable count is certainly correct. The image adds a great touch.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I'm sure first dates or any dates should be this way. I guess I'm too old fashioned. But I still believe things were better back then.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You are so right, I have gone dutch on many first dates and there have never been a second one! I soon dumped these no hopers! I enjoyed your humorous poem Patricia, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this. Thank you so much.