Burn It All Down
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter has such an intense atmosphere. I could practically feel the tension in the air as I read! The dialogue between Alex and Grayson was sharp. I could feel their strong personalities. The final leap into the unknown was a great twist! I am so eager to know what happens next. Keep it up! Your writing really pulls me in!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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This chapter has such an intense atmosphere. I could practically feel the tension in the air as I read! The dialogue between Alex and Grayson was sharp. I could feel their strong personalities. The final leap into the unknown was a great twist! I am so eager to know what happens next. Keep it up! Your writing really pulls me in!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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hold on to your socks
