Vision and Sound: Their Stories
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Comment from JJ Rowe
I'm starting from the beginning! I'll be able to help more as I dig into the story, but so far so good!! For this being a very inventive and complicated story, I love the way Magic understands he needs to make it simple and even says it. I enjoyed how he talks to me. It was almost like he would answer the questions that came to kind in the next sentence! As maybe a wiser being would or one that has told this story many times. Nice job mikey! On to the next...
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I'm starting from the beginning! I'll be able to help more as I dig into the story, but so far so good!! For this being a very inventive and complicated story, I love the way Magic understands he needs to make it simple and even says it. I enjoyed how he talks to me. It was almost like he would answer the questions that came to kind in the next sentence! As maybe a wiser being would or one that has told this story many times. Nice job mikey! On to the next...
Comment Written 13-Dec-2014
Comment from Freya Seerwing
This is greatly done for a first draft chapter. You've obviously thought out and planned the plot rather well. Did you do some World Building for this as well. It seems like it as I read through the narrative done by Magic Felix.
Is he some type of Keeper for all the souls who are sent and then return? It seems as if he is, as well as a recorder of knowledge garnered by all the other spirits.
I didn't spot any errors apart from one, but it was so minor I ignored it!
Well done on such a well crafted chapter.
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This is greatly done for a first draft chapter. You've obviously thought out and planned the plot rather well. Did you do some World Building for this as well. It seems like it as I read through the narrative done by Magic Felix.
Is he some type of Keeper for all the souls who are sent and then return? It seems as if he is, as well as a recorder of knowledge garnered by all the other spirits.
I didn't spot any errors apart from one, but it was so minor I ignored it!
Well done on such a well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
oh so far so good. I appreciate this part to explain rather than rush into a story that is not adequately prepard for the reader and enjoyer
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oh so far so good. I appreciate this part to explain rather than rush into a story that is not adequately prepard for the reader and enjoyer
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
Comment from Sankey
Still trying to get around this new venture of yours you funny man. I wonder if the Bard is writing all this ha? I read either this chapter or anothern one the other day and I was not sure I want4ed to go on this ride. But then that is Mikey and his queer curious ways. maybe we will get into it. Souls being Sexless...kinda like angels huh! No Spags shock horror. I am way behind and I doubt I am going to catch up as I need to do my own stuff too.
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Still trying to get around this new venture of yours you funny man. I wonder if the Bard is writing all this ha? I read either this chapter or anothern one the other day and I was not sure I want4ed to go on this ride. But then that is Mikey and his queer curious ways. maybe we will get into it. Souls being Sexless...kinda like angels huh! No Spags shock horror. I am way behind and I doubt I am going to catch up as I need to do my own stuff too.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Vision and sound- have a feeling I'm in for a philosophical ride with some levity provided by Magic Felix. Your premise has a lot of potential, your life as a musician and writer/poet no doubt having much to do with your vision of vision and sound, their interplay to create.
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Vision and sound- have a feeling I'm in for a philosophical ride with some levity provided by Magic Felix. Your premise has a lot of potential, your life as a musician and writer/poet no doubt having much to do with your vision of vision and sound, their interplay to create.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
Well, can see I probably should have read this chapter first before reading the next as I did yesterday, but it's the way these prompts line up in my que. Never the less, this sounds interesting and will follow it. Loren
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Well, can see I probably should have read this chapter first before reading the next as I did yesterday, but it's the way these prompts line up in my que. Never the less, this sounds interesting and will follow it. Loren
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from onebrit
Love the artwork you have chosen. This is a fascinating idea. I have long believed in old souls, many people have a light in their eyes that makes me believe they have been here many times before, they have an innate wisdom. This sounds as if it will be a terrific read. Keep it simple.
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Love the artwork you have chosen. This is a fascinating idea. I have long believed in old souls, many people have a light in their eyes that makes me believe they have been here many times before, they have an innate wisdom. This sounds as if it will be a terrific read. Keep it simple.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from LoannaLois
You have me at hello....This is so interesting in its concept that I will be anxious for all of the soul's stories. I like the idea of Magic Felix. He will be an important character, since the understanding of the stories is his to impart. This is a six, which I sadly do not have.
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You have me at hello....This is so interesting in its concept that I will be anxious for all of the soul's stories. I like the idea of Magic Felix. He will be an important character, since the understanding of the stories is his to impart. This is a six, which I sadly do not have.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
Wow! This sounds really interesting! I'm going to follow this work. I especially want to know more about Vision.
Good Luck with this work!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
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Hello there~!
Wow! This sounds really interesting! I'm going to follow this work. I especially want to know more about Vision.
Good Luck with this work!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, I have always thought that the souls in heaven who have recently arrived catch the others up on what is going on on earth. Very creative story line, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, I have always thought that the souls in heaven who have recently arrived catch the others up on what is going on on earth. Very creative story line, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
