Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "A Journey and A Surprise Meeting"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
15 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
The expansion of this story is natural and most welcome. This period of time is fertile ground historically. Lots going on and a perfect backdrop for the ongoing story.
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The expansion of this story is natural and most welcome. This period of time is fertile ground historically. Lots going on and a perfect backdrop for the ongoing story.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
really very interested mikey in how you outlay in this piece as you draw places and names pal something i am not great at excellent read very enjoyable excellent pen dear friend
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really very interested mikey in how you outlay in this piece as you draw places and names pal something i am not great at excellent read very enjoyable excellent pen dear friend
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Sankey
Interesting chapter my friend. Sorry takng so long to get to you. Some spags for you. sacrifice the young woman(')s life
would you (rather)that Cassius were one of them?
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Interesting chapter my friend. Sorry takng so long to get to you. Some spags for you. sacrifice the young woman(')s life
would you (rather)that Cassius were one of them?
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from ravenblack
I think the next chapter will more than likely show the contrast between the "witch's" practice of medicine with that of Gregorio. It never ceases to amaze me that ignorance prosecuted many for ancient lore while practicing "medicine" that killed more than it cured.
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I think the next chapter will more than likely show the contrast between the "witch's" practice of medicine with that of Gregorio. It never ceases to amaze me that ignorance prosecuted many for ancient lore while practicing "medicine" that killed more than it cured.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Very interesting chapter, I hope Valerius will manage to convince Leopold in some way to go easy on Julia. I like the mention of the herbal medicine, you must have done some good research. Characters are so believable. Most enjoyable. Faye
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Very interesting chapter, I hope Valerius will manage to convince Leopold in some way to go easy on Julia. I like the mention of the herbal medicine, you must have done some good research. Characters are so believable. Most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from Sasha
With each chapter you pull me deeper into the story. This is so well written and filled with so many questions that need...and I am sure will...be answered. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
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With each chapter you pull me deeper into the story. This is so well written and filled with so many questions that need...and I am sure will...be answered. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Michael: Well written and what happens next? Father R just killed the youth, what's he planning to do with Julia? Maybe, team the doctors together. I like the humor of the witch. Congrats on your book of month, win in top 5.
flylikeaneagle
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Michael: Well written and what happens next? Father R just killed the youth, what's he planning to do with Julia? Maybe, team the doctors together. I like the humor of the witch. Congrats on your book of month, win in top 5.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Nice chapter, Mikey. If I were you, though, I'd stop saying that you don't know where you're going with the story and appeciate suggestions from READERS to tell you what to WRITE. Just sounds kind of... tacky? Let us think you write your own story... give us some confidence that you DO know what you're doing. And I'll bet it will turn out just as good or better, cuz YOU have the imagination. Accept it, trust it, and don't be so damn uncertain, okay? :)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Nice chapter, Mikey. If I were you, though, I'd stop saying that you don't know where you're going with the story and appeciate suggestions from READERS to tell you what to WRITE. Just sounds kind of... tacky? Let us think you write your own story... give us some confidence that you DO know what you're doing. And I'll bet it will turn out just as good or better, cuz YOU have the imagination. Accept it, trust it, and don't be so damn uncertain, okay? :)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Okay. :) I do know what I'm doing, I just like the feedback. I wrote the ending about five years ago, but don't tell anybody. It does seem to have a life of its own though. Great fun. I'm writing the next part now and aliens from the future have landed in a spaceship with Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders and stuff... really cool!
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LOL! You're a nutcase, but at least you know it. :)
Comment from CR Delport
Oh, I didn't know the Father Leopold and Valerius know each other? At home, Julia's father still has a tough time believing his daughter. I love her explanation to the camel story :) This is another well crafted chapter.
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Oh, I didn't know the Father Leopold and Valerius know each other? At home, Julia's father still has a tough time believing his daughter. I love her explanation to the camel story :) This is another well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
Comment from seaglass
I truly hope Karma causes cancer to attack Father Rastavius from the inside out and make him suffer for all the pain and death he causes others. That being said, this continues to move along with consistency with the time and customs.
One possible error...
"If I were to tell you a camel sits at the table waiting for (super,..."Did you mean (supper)?"
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I truly hope Karma causes cancer to attack Father Rastavius from the inside out and make him suffer for all the pain and death he causes others. That being said, this continues to move along with consistency with the time and customs.
One possible error...
"If I were to tell you a camel sits at the table waiting for (super,..."Did you mean (supper)?"
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
