Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Delusions That Must Be Stopped"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
15 total reviews
Comment from Cat of Letters
Hi
I have come along to read this, as recommended by Jay Squires on his essay on reviewing. He points this novel out as a first class example of giving brief chapter summaries so new readers are not lost.
This is very well done and hugely interesting. When I get time, I shall read more of it. I am very interested in past lives.
I thought I would review this chapter for you, as you are one short of a 15 on it.
Best wishes,
Alison
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Hi
I have come along to read this, as recommended by Jay Squires on his essay on reviewing. He points this novel out as a first class example of giving brief chapter summaries so new readers are not lost.
This is very well done and hugely interesting. When I get time, I shall read more of it. I am very interested in past lives.
I thought I would review this chapter for you, as you are one short of a 15 on it.
Best wishes,
Alison
Comment Written 03-May-2015
Comment from ravenblack
I love Thurston's speech- " you hold your staff out as though to summon the lightning from on high..." We and he know where the true evil resides.
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I love Thurston's speech- " you hold your staff out as though to summon the lightning from on high..." We and he know where the true evil resides.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
now this mikey was excellent use of words drew a great picture My bones tell me that it is not so excellent read dear pal always a pleasure
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now this mikey was excellent use of words drew a great picture My bones tell me that it is not so excellent read dear pal always a pleasure
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
Comment from CR Delport
I think Thurston sees the truth, that it is indeed Leopold who is possessed and that Julia and Florentina are in serious danger. This is another well crafted chapter.
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I think Thurston sees the truth, that it is indeed Leopold who is possessed and that Julia and Florentina are in serious danger. This is another well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
Comment from Nosha17
The evil priest deserves any punishment he might get for having such evil thoughts and plans, provided justice is to be served. Well narrated and most enjoyable story. Faye
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The evil priest deserves any punishment he might get for having such evil thoughts and plans, provided justice is to be served. Well narrated and most enjoyable story. Faye
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
Comment from faragon
A very well written chapter. The plot grows more suspenseful and exciting. I like how you have broken up the sections when the parties separate. It makes it an easy read. :D
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A very well written chapter. The plot grows more suspenseful and exciting. I like how you have broken up the sections when the parties separate. It makes it an easy read. :D
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is excellent writing. I can feel the tension the room. What would one do in these days if the clergy is processed. And if Satan wanted to do the greatest amount of harm, a clergy would be the perfect vessel. Now I feel great sympathy for the good priest. He has many to protect.
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This is excellent writing. I can feel the tension the room. What would one do in these days if the clergy is processed. And if Satan wanted to do the greatest amount of harm, a clergy would be the perfect vessel. Now I feel great sympathy for the good priest. He has many to protect.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
Comment from Sasha
Please give us what we want...Leopold found guilty of demonic possession. Maybe a little corny, but definitely would make the reader happy.
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Please give us what we want...Leopold found guilty of demonic possession. Maybe a little corny, but definitely would make the reader happy.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
Nice chapter, Mikey, as always.
"The church believes in the power of prayer young lady. -- Comma after 'prayer'
True that. -- Would that be historically accurate dialogue?
Perhaps a chair." Julia answered softly. -- Comma after 'chair'
Julia smiled, -- Period.
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Nice chapter, Mikey, as always.
"The church believes in the power of prayer young lady. -- Comma after 'prayer'
True that. -- Would that be historically accurate dialogue?
Perhaps a chair." Julia answered softly. -- Comma after 'chair'
Julia smiled, -- Period.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Ever chapter grabs your attention. You are an exceptionally good writer and know exactly how to draw the reader in.
an interesting development
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Ever chapter grabs your attention. You are an exceptionally good writer and know exactly how to draw the reader in.
an interesting development
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
