Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "The Red Plague"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
13 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I know Valerius is right, but I agree with Trellitia, I'd hang him upside-down from a tree and just let him die...not particularly compassionate, but what the heck, I clearly do not like Cicero. Great work with this chapter. Trellitia is an amazing woman and works very well under pressure.
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I know Valerius is right, but I agree with Trellitia, I'd hang him upside-down from a tree and just let him die...not particularly compassionate, but what the heck, I clearly do not like Cicero. Great work with this chapter. Trellitia is an amazing woman and works very well under pressure.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
Comment from robina1978
I love these chapter, this one especially is very good. Many are infected but even Cicero will receive treatment, Valerius decides being a Doctor he has to obey his oath. Well done.
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I love these chapter, this one especially is very good. Many are infected but even Cicero will receive treatment, Valerius decides being a Doctor he has to obey his oath. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is great descriptive writing and dialog. So often the evil-doers in any religion taints the entire whole.
"I'm a believer in what he only professes to believe."
Great word and a reminder that we have responsibility to be the correct example of what false teachers deface.
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This is great descriptive writing and dialog. So often the evil-doers in any religion taints the entire whole.
"I'm a believer in what he only professes to believe."
Great word and a reminder that we have responsibility to be the correct example of what false teachers deface.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I would have Cicero die just to get rid of the bastard, but the story is better, of course, if he lives and chnages his mind about them all being evil demons. Good episode. I'm glad Trellita and others are immune from having it earlier. Otherwise, they'd probably all die and what a terrible ending that would make. LOL!
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I would have Cicero die just to get rid of the bastard, but the story is better, of course, if he lives and chnages his mind about them all being evil demons. Good episode. I'm glad Trellita and others are immune from having it earlier. Otherwise, they'd probably all die and what a terrible ending that would make. LOL!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
As always, this story is exciting...note that last chapter Abraus fell off of the horse, fainted. Now, this chapter he is shouting. Maybe, get him help first or someone else shout.
I like how the village people are coming to the doctor and Trellita for help instead of the priest who are looking for demons in everyone. Well written. Where are you going with the next one? Do the love birds get married?
Have a blessed Christmas, my friend, flylikeaneagle
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As always, this story is exciting...note that last chapter Abraus fell off of the horse, fainted. Now, this chapter he is shouting. Maybe, get him help first or someone else shout.
I like how the village people are coming to the doctor and Trellita for help instead of the priest who are looking for demons in everyone. Well written. Where are you going with the next one? Do the love birds get married?
Have a blessed Christmas, my friend, flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
I had to google the Red Plague. Was it something of your invention, Mikey? Google connected it with Vampirism, but also mentioned some childhood diseases, such as measles and chicken pox. Just wondering.
This was an entertaining chapter, as are all yours. Don't tell me the crisis is going to fizzle out because everyone gets sick and no one has the energy to fight the demons?
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I had to google the Red Plague. Was it something of your invention, Mikey? Google connected it with Vampirism, but also mentioned some childhood diseases, such as measles and chicken pox. Just wondering.
This was an entertaining chapter, as are all yours. Don't tell me the crisis is going to fizzle out because everyone gets sick and no one has the energy to fight the demons?
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Another great chapter. When I read your chapters I wonder what next you could think of and you never fail to amaze me.
Well written as usual with good descriptive languaage
Happy Holidays
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Another great chapter. When I read your chapters I wonder what next you could think of and you never fail to amaze me.
Well written as usual with good descriptive languaage
Happy Holidays
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
Comment from Sankey
Good work mate. What else are you gonna come up with hehe? Good reading and still a new suspense now with the red plague. A spag for you to look at.
better perhaps the(a)n they would receive in Constantinople."
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Good work mate. What else are you gonna come up with hehe? Good reading and still a new suspense now with the red plague. A spag for you to look at.
better perhaps the(a)n they would receive in Constantinople."
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Good catch. As usual, you're the only one that saw that. I think I've come up with enough for this "little" segment. Hahaha. This segment is now longer than any of my novels!!
Comment from nordicgirl
I think i see where you are going. The question is, who dies? This is going to be sad, but at least they got to feel each other in the flesh and enjoy their love for once. Will they ever live a full life together? They'd better!! :))
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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I think i see where you are going. The question is, who dies? This is going to be sad, but at least they got to feel each other in the flesh and enjoy their love for once. Will they ever live a full life together? They'd better!! :))
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Eventually. That's the plan anyway. Thank you. mikey
Comment from Michaelk
I find it ironic that after all the danger both real and eluded to that was presented by the priests, now the more deadly enemy is a disease. You really brought that out of nowhere. Quite an interesting twist. This section of the story is coming to a close in a way that I did not expect. I was thinking all along that by now Julia would've been burned at the stake as a witch.
Loved Valerius' line about treating Cicero the way he professes to believe.
Great chapter, not sure how you will end this section.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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I find it ironic that after all the danger both real and eluded to that was presented by the priests, now the more deadly enemy is a disease. You really brought that out of nowhere. Quite an interesting twist. This section of the story is coming to a close in a way that I did not expect. I was thinking all along that by now Julia would've been burned at the stake as a witch.
Loved Valerius' line about treating Cicero the way he professes to believe.
Great chapter, not sure how you will end this section.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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I have to kill at least one of them, maybe both. Or let them have each other and write something else, but I have several lifetime's to go. I don't think I'll go this crazy again. mikey
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Yeah, I thought the last one was long. You outdid yourself this time. You have me seriously scared for the next segment. You'll be writing a 'War and Peace' length section.
