Comment from Treischel

Excellent

This is an outstanding 1-6-1 formatted poem that perfectly meets the prompt requirements and quite possibly could be a winner. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a pleasant and blessed Sunday.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match.
It always amazes me how a writer can use s few words and get a huge point across.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice weekend.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct syllable count and rhyme. I think you did a great job conveying the action in tennis in the few syllables allotted. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from EricBrady

Excellent

I always wanted to play tennis. To be able to put the spin on the ball would be difficult. Great piece and description. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. We used to play tennis, and later squash.

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

Great quick piece. They say it's all in the serve and indeed with an ace it truly applies. Ideal picture to add value to the message.
Well done

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week..

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Great entry for this contest. Much harder than it looks also. Especially with sports, where I draw a huge blank....I wish you good luck....blessings....

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week..

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Nice 1-6-1 poem about sports. The poem was written in words creating a picture. Very well done. Nice picture used to complete your poem.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week..

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

This is another nice little poem that's worthy of being recognized. I enjoyed the picture you found to go with it and also your three line poem, which was fun to read.

Kat

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week..

reply by MizKat on 04-Aug-2016

With all of my aches and pains none of the week feels very good. LOL Such is life when a person gets as old as I am.
Kat

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a very timely sport-like contest in view of the incoming Olympics Games and all. The format is perfect for a 1-6-1. Congratulations. I hope you win.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week..

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hello Ine;
-I really like your sports 1/6/1 syllabic formatted poem. A thend it fits requirements of sports it has to line that rhyme very well.
-I like the picture would suggest tennis just like your words do as they both intertwine very well in thought and concept.
-Good luck in the contest and take care.
Alex

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016

This is from the picture challenging group, hope you enjoy.