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The I A C Murders

Valentine's Horror Club Entry

18 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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A murder mystery witih a twist. I can see why cupid is mad about the cheating people after all the work he did in bringing them together.
But to kill them is totally opposite of his duty as God of Love. I like the acronym on the arrows.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Thank you for the excellent review and congrats, Joan. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great rest of your weekend.

    Ron
reply by dragonpoet on 01-Mar-2020
    My pleasure, Ron, on all accounts. Same to you.
    Joan
Comment from Chrissy710
Exceptional
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Hi Dragon Skulls Well done an excellent choice for this contest I loved your race along meter rhyme and story so original Congratulations Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Thank you for the for the great review and giant sixer, Christine. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and congrats, C. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.

    ;)

    Ron
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Definitely deserving of first place is this fab entry of yours! Great rhythm and flow, and very original content, it blew me away...literally lol! Congratulations xoxoxo

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Lol. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Gypsy MC. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and congrats. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.

    Ron
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Congratulations on your win! Fresh and witty, with quite a twist to top it off. Priceless picture--Cupid looks pissed indeed! Cheers. LIZ (I cringe at your vivid bloody slush--no more cherry snow-cones for me!)

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Haha. Sorry I ruined snow cones for you. Thank you for the great review and congrats, Elizabeth.

    Ron
Comment from juliaSjames
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Congratulations on your win with this terrific entry. Well composed as a fast moving murder investigation, it actually took a while for the penny to drop.

There was a hit tune, way back when that came to mind immediately when I read your poem. 'Stupid Cupid". LOL

Thanks for the entertainment.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Julia. I really appreciate the gracious stars and congrats. I'm glad you liked my little tale. Have a wonderful rrest of your weekend.

    Ron
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a fun read and well deserved win. I love your little detective story with a romantic twist. Or should I say love gone awry fable. It is succinctly writ and with excellent rhyme. It was a great way to start my day. - Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Wendy. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you liked my silly little offering. Have a wonderful rest of you weekend.

    Ron
Comment from Contests

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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Wow, Thank you, FS.
Comment from w.j.debi
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I have read some mythology where Cupid is a bit vindictive, but you put it out there clearly. Watch out for Cupid's vengeance if you aren't a true lover. And no one would know better than he would. hehe

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Lol, yeah, I made him slightly more mischievous in this one. Thank you so much for the great review and the giant sixer, Debi. I'm glad you liked my little tale of a murderous Cupid. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your weekend. Thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from Bill Pinder
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This is a definite six for creativity and combining different styles. The picture of Cupid is hilarious. I really like how you wrote this crime story in ABCB rhyme and 8686 rhythm.
Bill

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the great review and big six offer, Bill. I think I actually put almost as much time into creating the pictures for this as it did to write the piece. Lol. I'm glad you liked my little poem/story, friend. Have a great rest of your weekend.

    Ron
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Excellent
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This is a very catchy poem, carefully crafted and that unfolds like a story.
Just once the rythme seemed to stumble slightly, but I must have imagined it, as I couldn't find it when I read it again looking for that.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Katherine. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked my silly little tale. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.

    Ron